Dear Breanna (
@ayo_brezzy),
thank you for reaching out to me for sponsoring the Proposal Fee.
I wasn't able to see the King of Wakanda yet, but I'm planning to in the near future. So you found at least one Marvel fan here
Unfortunately I have to decline your request. Your proposal violates two of my rules (It's marketing and asks for more than 150 DASH).
I wanted to use the opportunity to give you some feedback on your proposal, since you seemed to be very motivated, which is the kind of spirit I'm looking for in future proposal owners.
I apologize in advance if something is formulated harsh, but English is my second language. I'm very cheerful while I'm writing this
Hi, I'm Breanna and this is my proposal.
Nice to meet you too, but I'm no Richard Roundtree, so it would be nice if I wouldn't have to do detective work to get your prior work experience (accountant) and why you are qualified to do this kind of project (former alumni of a HBCU). Do you have links to a public profile so we can verify? (linkedin or other).
Funding: 675 total (45/305/335) 3 month engagement
As JZA already pointed out, I also would recommend starting smaller and maybe with only one HBCU Event.
Also please provide a more detailed budget.
PROJECT DESCRIPTION:
Our project will create a fun-tainment tour visiting 5 regions and engaging with 91 HBCUs (Historically Black Colleges and Universities) in order to target the future leaders in business and technology, as well as promote the economic benefit of DASH (digital currency) to a currently untapped population. While engaging our team aims to initiate DASH as an approved payment option at all 91 HBCUs. And film the process for a web series that will begin airing weekly Sunday, April 15th 2018 through June 3rd, 2018.
· Why HBCU’s?
Defined by the Higher Education Act of 1965, an HBCU is simply stated:
“…any historically black college or university that was established prior to 1964, whose principal mission was, and is, the education of black Americans”
And though that definition works, ask any graduate of an HBCU and they will tell it you that’s is so much more. As a graduate of Norfolk State University, it was my Wakanda.
African American’s as a demographic are a key community with all marketing and advertising done in this country. And as evidenced by the recent film ‘Black Panther’s’ box office success [$400 Million opening weekend], we yearn to support products that value our unique identity and voice.
Dash’s placement as the first crypto currency to target our community, not just for our dollar, but as a partner in educational and economic advancement would make DASH the digital currency of choice for 43 million African American’s.
Link: African-Americans Demographic and Consumer Spending Trends Report - Research and Markets
I like your reasoning and have to agree. It is an interesting demographic. Maybe you could elaborate more on the following two points:
- How do you want to get all 91 HBCUs to accept DASH as a payment option for tuition if they already are making a steady paycheck with government guaranteed student loan debt? Provide a more detailed plan
- Are you going to film the documentary and coordinate the marketing? Who is your Shuri? Introduce us to your team.
- The link to the Spending Trends report isn't there. (Might be because you are a new member, try adding the link again)
1.) 29th Annual Honda Campus All-Star Challenge National Quiz bowl Tournament (4/7 to 4/11).
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Planned DASH events there include a “Golden DASH” scavenger hunt (Think Harry Potter’s Snitch), collectible Dash pins, history of currency pop up quizzes (like we REALLY love trivia). The Winner of each competition win .29 Dash (to commemorate the tournaments year).
How much does sponsoring this event take from your planned budget?
What kind of reach does this Quiz Bowl have? Only local? If Yes how many attendees can be expected? Link?
Also a little bit more detail on the "Golden DASH" would be nice.
2.) Hampton University Film Invitational (4/18/2018)
Hampton University, home of the school that provided the backdrop to the household famous television series “A Different World”, will engage its Liberal Arts college in a campus wide competition. Through relationships with Hampton University DASH will extend the reach to be a “Battle of the Bays” invitational for all the Virginia HBCUs. (Hampton, Norfolk State, Virginia State, Elizabeth City, and Virginia Union). Gearing up for the event we will advertise through Hampton University Grad, DJ Envy for promotion via social media and or ‘the breakfast club”. The Breakfast Club is a top 20 syndicated morning radio show that is simulcast on iHeartRadio, Revolt TV, and YouTube.
Similar to the previous point. You described the reach of your promotion campaign but not of the "Battle of the Bays". As I understand it it's some kind of Film Festival? Please elaborate and add the budget.
Also a link would help a lot, since MNOs might not be in or from the US.
3.) Regional BlockChain ShowDown (May 2018)
In utilizing technology, we will create a simulated BlockChain competition. Teams will work to earn points based on speed of completion and degree of difficulty. Final 4, Semi Final, and Grand Prize Winner will be awarded in Dash style and filmed at their campus for that week’s web series.
Is this a new event that you will create or is it an established one? Do you have experience in holding a hackathon? Do you have a background in blockchain programming or someone on your team who has this skill?
And again: Budget is missing.
4.) National Divine Dash (May 2018)
If you’ve seen “Stomp the Yard”, “Burning Sands” or “School Daze” you may know how important the National PanHellenic Council (otherwise known as the Divine 9) is to our schools and communities. The nine fraternities and sororities that comprise the committee represent a total of approximately $1.5 million college age or graduate members throughout the world. My sorority, for example, Zeta Phi Beta Sorority Incorporated, was the first to charter a chapter in Monrovia, Liberia, Africa. The primary purpose and focus of member organizations remains camaraderie and academic excellence for its members and service to the communities they serve. This competition will be open to all undergraduate chapter (not just HBCU’s) to bring awareness and educate their campus on Dash and digital currency. The top 10 chapters nationwide will win DASH to fund chapter activities in the upcoming school year.
(I've actually seen Stomp the Yard, always gets me pumped when they are training in the empty pool. That's the magic of Timbaland I guess. The second one was unfortunately kinda forgettable.)
I understand the concept of sororities but I really don't know what a "chapter" in this context means. Is this some kind of a stepping dance battle? Maybe you can elaborate a little bit more on what National Divine Dash is, for people who are not from an (US) academic background.
Recurring theme: Budget is MIA.
Engagement Stats
· Campuses – 91 HBCUs and 2,000 (estimated) campuses w/ one or more D9 chapter
· Partnership with Honda – 28,000 American employees, 211,000 worldwide
· Viral potential – HIGH
A large number of celebrity HBCU alumni known for promoting academic excellence from fellow Alum. They include names such as; Steve Harvey, Sean ‘Puff Daddy’ Combs, Oprah Winfrey, Spike Lee, Eryka Badu, Taraji P. Henson, Common, Samuel L. Jackson, Ryan Coogler and Chadwick Boseman.
· Educational – 42% of all African Americans in Engineering and Science attended an HBCU
All comments on viability to the MNO's appreciated!
These are good points, but again, how do you come to play?
I know Honda has 211,000 employees worldwide. Do they all come to the Quiz bowl?
If you can guarantee that Samuel L. Jackson will promote this with "I need some motherf*cking DASH in my motherf*cking wallet!" you'll have a lot of Yes votes on your hand.
So to summarize:
- Add a detailed Budget Plan
- Who are you?
- Who are your Team members?
- More explanations (from a Non-US Standpoint)
If you can incorporate my feedback and revise your proposal, you'll most likely win the heart of the DAO.
Best Regards from Germany
AnCapitol